I COMPOSED A SONG!

Hey guys...I composed a song!!! And I just want to get feedback from some people. Plz check it out! I attached the song in mp3 format but the file was too big    You can hear the extreme low quality song at youtube!

theres the link....hope u guys enjoy it...btw it took a bunch of time! plz comment on youtube or here...doesn't matter I just need to get better...lol THANKS!

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p.s. I don't mind if you start dancing in the song at the last minute because it owns!!!! especially the crazy solo!

Update: new album art cover and new channel for people to check me out! thanks!

thanks man! appreciate you feedback

Thanks for your feed back bro...I made this for a video game, heard of jamlegend? Anyways it was also a bit electronic for me too. I will try and use for real instruments... thanks so much...feedback really helps!

lol...thats true...ill try it out...btw i made another song...tons of bass...probably took like 10 hours to make ill post it once i finished all of the revisions on it.  Thanks for your feedback!

Give me one more day to revise and then ill post it... lol

theres one part...just tell me the times and ill make some for u... for both songs...

I finished it...but i showed my friends and they said that the last part was too long...so I have to revise it....and change it real quick. If you want I could give you the song but its not completely finished....but it will be super freaking high quality...